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« Reply #15 on: November 24, 2011, 11:53:48 pm »

Agree with Ben - looks good, but could do with tweaks.
Have you seen the alternate knight shields? They are bolder designs that might be easier for sketches than the original shield design (which I find a pig to get looking right at even a small angle).

Keep it up! I'll share the very nice pic you sent me when I get a few mins at a computer...
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« Reply #16 on: November 25, 2011, 02:44:24 am »

This is a piece I had on the back burner, a bit of judicious erasing, I finished in light of the points expressed. Smiley



Thinking of a market stall next, based on the accessory set previewed not so long ago. Also an opportunity to move on from enuks for awhile Wink
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« Reply #17 on: November 27, 2011, 09:27:42 pm »

Excellent work!- also liked the bithday card
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« Reply #18 on: November 27, 2011, 09:52:36 pm »

Looks good Taelan. I like the nice simple hat design.

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« Reply #19 on: November 28, 2011, 12:39:41 am »

Brilliant sketches. It's the art which brings games like WoT to life and your work is certainly enhancing that for me, so thank you  Grin
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« Reply #20 on: November 28, 2011, 11:46:13 am »

I never did comment on this one did I? She looks great. The hat works well, even I'm not sure how she would pull her hood up  Wink
If I was being really picky I would comment that the enuk's front hoof is larger than the rear-facing ones.

Looking forward to seeing your market stall - I would like to do some scenery pieces and some inspiration would be fantastic!
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« Reply #21 on: November 28, 2011, 02:59:07 pm »

Critique enjoyed and hood wardrobe malfunction noted.

Thanks for the great feedback all, in light of interest; this is a quick iPhone snapshot of the Markets in progress using POV sketch.


Finished piece soon Smiley

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« Reply #22 on: November 28, 2011, 05:29:27 pm »

Yup, that works.  Grin
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« Reply #23 on: November 28, 2011, 05:39:55 pm »

Very nice  Cheesy  That really sets a nice sceen and I like the detail.

Couple of comments, The fubarnii neck looks a bit dislocated to me and the enuk behind the drinking enuk looks a bit bendy in the neck. Maybe I've just got a thing for necks!
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« Reply #24 on: November 28, 2011, 05:43:19 pm »

Wow Taelan. You've captured a sense of the market and it gives me the feel of a caravan that has arrived at its destination. Could be some inspiration for Bradlin here with the shops.

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« Reply #25 on: November 28, 2011, 08:31:34 pm »

Really nice looking picture.
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« Reply #26 on: November 28, 2011, 10:20:38 pm »

Cheers Cheesy

I'll do those corrections, on review the "Guide" character certainly does have an odd neck for a Fubarnii. I'll also address the enuk in the distance.

Few more angle errors and the last couple of stalls, then into clean+details.

Always interesting what you miss without other eyes taking a gander. Smiley

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« Reply #27 on: November 29, 2011, 05:11:47 am »

|The Markets|





Hopefully caught all the mistakes Smiley

- T.
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« Reply #28 on: November 29, 2011, 08:14:07 am »

Err wheres the pic...?

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« Reply #29 on: November 29, 2011, 08:19:51 am »

Hi Norse,

Hrrmm.. showing up for me. Next best thing then! Direct Link. Grin

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