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« Reply #30 on: May 09, 2011, 06:04:15 pm »

I finally got through the 2nd wave of writings. These fluff threads are getting longer and longer Wink

Great read, you are really capturing a sense of squabbling merchants and scheming Lanak.

Any idea where you are going to place your city? I'd suggest near a forest, perhaps the small one on the right of Agoran Wastes. There seem to be a couple of cities there plus they could help control trade from the south and east.

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« Reply #31 on: May 09, 2011, 06:26:51 pm »

I hadn't really thought about and I think Mike should have the honours as im not to fussed . Im glad you liked the internal politics! I wanted to create a sense of loose conflict between them and obliged loyalty to the City and the Lanak as otherwise why wouldnt they just other-throw the Lanak who taxes them?  all though my person favourite is the Enarii fish myth Cheesy
And yes the last one was kinda essayish :s

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I have just had a look on the map and there are a few unnamed ones i quite like the look of either Directly east from the wastes of south east. These four look pretty interesting Smiley But the red one interests me the most! Can I have that city? Pleeeease
though is it even in the empire?
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« Reply #32 on: May 09, 2011, 08:43:57 pm »

I could imagine it being up near Larigal... certainly not in Casani (sorry...).

Another very rough sketch for you...
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« Reply #33 on: May 09, 2011, 08:50:23 pm »

I need to brush up on my geography where is Larigal? :3
That pic looks awesome! I love the goggles and the pipe/hookah! I think i just found my new Avatar Grin
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« Reply #34 on: May 09, 2011, 09:01:07 pm »

Larigal is on the coast of the great lakes (West of Elani Ros), so somewhere in that region.
Glad you like the pic.  Smiley
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« Reply #35 on: May 09, 2011, 09:09:41 pm »

Yes! i like that region! and the great lakes fit the story very well!
How about any of the 3 black ringed cities closest to Elani ros that i marked out? I like the top one Smiley
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« Reply #36 on: May 09, 2011, 09:15:24 pm »

Love the sketch. I could imagine the hats getting a bit "mine is bigger than yours!" The richer & more status the higher the hat.

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« Reply #37 on: May 11, 2011, 10:21:23 pm »

Another doodle... very rough, but hope it fits. Not sure on the big creature yet!

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« Reply #38 on: May 11, 2011, 10:31:36 pm »

That Is ridiculously AWESOME!!!
and he has a Pree pree! Cheesy
Thats exactly the sort of image I wanted for my clan! and the lantern is a great touch too!

Oh btw did you get my PM mike? about sending me the invoice?
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« Reply #39 on: May 11, 2011, 10:39:02 pm »

Glad you like - it's just a quick sketch, but it's nice to flesh ideas out a bit sometimes.

I did get your pm, but been rather busy sketching  Wink
I'll send you an invoice soon, but I won't get to the post office until the weekend anyway.
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« Reply #40 on: May 11, 2011, 10:55:50 pm »

Phew Im glad you got it! i had terrible thoughts of it being lost in transition and never getting my hands on those traders Tongue
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« Reply #41 on: May 12, 2011, 06:54:44 am »

Whoa the sketch is very cool; he looks very comfortable up there.

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« Reply #42 on: May 12, 2011, 01:41:23 pm »

I don't imagine the Lanak is ever anything but comfortable!

I think Enipel is located somewhere along the north-western coasts of the great lakes. Maybe the small city to the east of the southernmost of your black suggestions. I'm not certain yet... That does make them relatively close neighbours to larigal, so that would be a good source of engineering know-how.
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« Reply #43 on: May 12, 2011, 06:33:55 pm »

I don't imagine the Lanak is ever anything but comfortable!

Comfortable and rich at all times Grin

Im happy for it to go anywhere and near the lakes makes good sense
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